专家:广东省封开县江口中学 吴则磊 王冲
首先,我们一起看一下今年的读写任务题目。
Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala(考拉)at the Featherdale wildlife park in southern Australia. All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining. You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept walking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off. That’s right--sleep it off. The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy。
The reason Jackie and her fellow koala are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged or photographed by tourists, who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience. Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make practice illegal, which is understandable. How would you react, my friend, if you were trying to sleep off in dozen times and some round, furry creature smelling of grass kept you walking?
*考拉即树袋熊
【写作内容】
1。以约30个词概括这段短文的内容
2. 然后以约120个词就以“该不该禁止旅客和动物拍照”进行议论,内容包括:
(1) 人们在参观动物时为什么喜欢和动物拍照
(2)假如你处在动物的处境,你会有什么反应
(3)你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照
【写作要求】
1. 在作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不能直接引用文中的内容
2. 作文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校的名称
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯
专家点评:
今年的读写任务主要有以下特点:
一、在考察学生基础知识的同时也在培养学生价值观的形成
今年的读写任务让学生就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”展开议论。议论文的写作有助于培养学生正确的价值观,纠正不正确的价值观。今年的读写任务暗中旨在培养学生保护野生动物的观念、把多一点的空间还给动物的观念、与动物和谐共存的观念。
二、阅读材料具有很强的倾向性
通过浏览读写任务的阅读材料,我们可以感觉到文章运用了一种抱怨的写作方式,即抱怨游客过频繁的与动物园里的动物进行拍照从而影响到动物的正常生活。而读写任务的写作要求又让学生就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”展开议论,因此如果考生从“应该禁止游客和动物拍照”这一观点入手的话就迎合了阅读材料,同时也能够受到改卷老师的青睐。据了解,绝大多数考生都从“应该禁止游客和动物拍照”这一观点入手。