高考II卷英语作文点评:不“偏”不“奇”

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2009年这篇全国高考(论坛)卷(不含听力)书面表达试题,命题难易度稳定,从细节表达和基础语言表达技能上看,略微增加一点繁琐度。但这篇书面表达尤其突出了生活气息和语言的交际性。从体裁上看,采用了通用的高考设计模式:书信模式。更突出“实用”的交际原则这种实用文体。体现了 “稳定”的高考测试原则。从写作题材上来看,考生们会感受到不“奇”但是要真正完整写清楚内容,他们就需要结合语言基础来完整表达。比如:数词的表达“800米的街道(this 800-metre street),600多年 (over 600 years old),300余家,17路,地铁2号线(subway Line 2)”等等,考生需要仔细注意这些表达方式。


(附原题和范文)

第三节 书面表达 (30分)

假定你是李华,你的美国朋友打算暑期来北京旅游,来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写信回复,简单介绍以下内容:

1、简况:长800米、600多年历史、300余家商铺;

2、位置:天安门广场南面;

3、交通:公共汽车17、69、59等路,地铁2号线;

4、特色:步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。

参考词汇:

步行街:pedestrian street

当当车:trolley car

地铁:subway

注意:

1、词数100左右,开头语已经为你写好;

2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

作文范文:

Dear Sarah,

Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it.

Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-metre street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No.17, 69 or 59.subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to theaters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life, I’m sure you’ll like it.


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